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Salmane

Magical Trap?

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Did you? I didn't see it.

 

You sketched out the character types/abilities, but I didn't see any real discussion of how the story was going to move. Like, "They're in an army, but when their platoon is defeated, they desert and find a new life outside of Salova." Or "When they're forced to kill their friends in their training, several of them start to have questions about whether what they are doing is right and begin to plan the overthrow of the government." Or something like that. :/

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The problem is mostly the fact that we don't know where the story is headed. Things like what do these people do in the other town(would have to reread the first posts to remember anything) and based on that, what roles should the character fill. A rebel to the system? A evil mastermind behind the system? an innocent thrown into the mix? blah blah blah.

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